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بائعة الورد 04-21-2009 10:07 AM

a love poem> >>>written by me
 
[FONT="Comic Sans MS"]remember me
don't ever leave me
u just killed me
don't look @ me
leave me alone
in my upset tune
my heart is broken
my soul is stolen
my eyes r crying
my soul i dying
i yearned 2 u
i wonna see u
come back 2 me
gossip with me
then "u" will leave me
so just 4get me
4ever 4get me
don't ever come back 2 me
[/FONT


so what do u think of my poem???]

المدعي العام 04-21-2009 10:21 PM

[font="Comic Sans MS"]remember me

ازكرني ..

don't ever leave me

لا تتركني أبداً ..
u just killed me

قتلتني ..
don't look @ me

لا تنظر الي ..
leave me alone

اتركني وحيداً ..
in my upset tune

في غضبي ..

my heart is broken

قلبي مكسور ..

my soul is stolen

روحي مسروقة ..

my eyes r crying

عيناي تبكيان ..

my soul i dying

روحي تموت ..

i yearned 2 u

صرخت عليك ..

i wonna see u

أريد أن أراك ..

come back 2 me

عد الي ..

gossip with me

تكلم معي ..

then "u" will leave me

ثم ستتركني ..

so just 4get me

انساني فقط ..

4ever 4get me

انساني للأبد ..

don't ever come back 2 me[/FONT

و لا تعد الي أبداً ..


so what do u think of my poem???]
well ,, i dont know what to say about that .. coz i don`t really like poems .. but as a beginning .. i think it`s great ..

go on the good job .. thx alot ba2e3at al wrd ..

بغمزة وقعت خمسة 04-23-2009 08:35 AM

nice poem


i like it sweety



keep it up




regards

بائعة الورد 04-23-2009 01:00 PM

[glow=990066]thank u :)[/glow]


الساعة الآن 01:35 AM.

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